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I failed to write the words I could never speak, and failed to speak the words I could never write. It was I the fool, all a long, still holding on to my iron maiden. Even if she closes in on another, She will remain to have pieces of me that I can never have back.

It was I the fool, all a long, loving a maiden of steel.

But there have been none as foolish as I, who still kneel honoring the pledge, even though our time has been severed. The flames are all around, engulfing whatever may have been left, and whatever it may char. Beating in your breast is the heart that once belonged to me, but I do not mind. It is yours to do as you wish as you please.

Here I am, to pledge myself to you, for better or for worse, to love and to hold. Even if you break that pledge, here I will be to kneel to your every whim.
Its not the fire though, nor the smoke, that threatens to distinguish the life from thine eyes. Its not the heart you stole which proudly beats in your breast, nor is it the hell which has come to consume me.

It was I the fool, all along, who was picking himself apart. So I have come to let you finish me, in our glorious castle crumbling and toppling to the ground. It was I that pledged to you, my heart of gold to your empty steel cage.

Go ahead, rip it out, and feast upon it.

The fool will stay at your feet keeled though, embracing the flames upon my burning funeral pier.

It was I the fool, who fell for man’s most beautiful and deadly weapon of all, love.

It was I the fool, who watched you devour the hearts of others, but will not budge from your feet.

Even if you do not want me, you may keep the parts of me you stole, you may keep the heart of gold that beats in your breast, and you may keep me if not to abuse me.

It was I the fool, all along, loving a maiden of steel.
©2009 ~All-Blue
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Author's Comments

This is based off of my character Valentin, whom I still love dearly.

This just randomly popped into my head, so I may decide to trash it, or polish it. Right now I'm not really sure where my head lies.

Even if his iron maiden closes in another in her iron breast, he will not leave her, not even if it kills him.

It is he, who is the most foolish of all..

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:iconwordsaremyweakness:
I must must must illustrate this. Is that okay? The visuals that are running through my head are too beautiful to ignore. I love this. I love the idea of never-ending love! I believe in it. And I think the only way one can believe in it is to practice it - no matter what anyone else in the world decides to do, no matter how foolish it may seem.

--
"You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have really lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love."
-Henry Drummond

Love Yourself for Art Contest: [link]
:icondreamskaype:
Poor Valentin :(

Lovely piece though :heart:

--
-Alucard: What is the problem, my sweet, emo flower!?
-Vincent: You never call me any more! And I made you waffles!
~PureVenem 'n me.

...Yes. That be FF-VII Vin and Hellsing Alucard :3
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...

-jaw dropped-

Th-thank you so much... O_O...

In all honesty, I'm rather surprised you like this quick little thing. It not even polished and its redundant, but I'm even more shocked you want to draw something to it.

...

Just...wow...

In short, I'd be deeply honored if you did so.

:heart:
:iconall-blue:
Indeed...There's nothing anyone can tell him though, that will make him give up. He'll just have to eventually move on when he decides its time..

Thank you, I'm not all that fond of it because of how quick I did this, but oh well. Thank you so much.
:icondreamskaype:
Moving at one's own pace is often the best *nod*

Aw...it's still nice though <3

--
-Alucard: What is the problem, my sweet, emo flower!?
-Vincent: You never call me any more! And I made you waffles!
~PureVenem 'n me.

...Yes. That be FF-VII Vin and Hellsing Alucard :3
:iconwordsaremyweakness:
!!!

Yay! I'm so excited - I think I'm going to have to start sketching it out tonight.

I think there's really something special there - with the imagery you're using. The metaphors.

I will most definitely give you credit. <3

--
"You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have really lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love."
-Henry Drummond

Love Yourself for Art Contest: [link]
:iconall-blue:
I don't think I can thank you enough and tell you just how deeply honored I am. Seriously, it means a lot.

I'll be looking forward to it, and I do hope you have a lot of fun with it.
:iconall-blue:
Haha, why does that phrase sound familiar? -giggle-

I have a picture that I might do to this actually. It'll be seriously labor intensive though.
:icondreamskaype:
I can't imagine :giggle:

Ooh...well, it is summer, so you have time, right? :D

--
-Alucard: What is the problem, my sweet, emo flower!?
-Vincent: You never call me any more! And I made you waffles!
~PureVenem 'n me.

...Yes. That be FF-VII Vin and Hellsing Alucard :3

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